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Post by TAMMY on Aug 8, 2005 20:44:29 GMT -5
Lanie,
i read your fanfic but havent give any feedback bc im still waiting.
SO far im luving the chapter alot!!I love how ml fell asleep on Kw shoulder. Its just too sweet. I luv ur story. I hope there are more comin..ur such a great writer! judoos for u girl:)
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Post by Lanie on Aug 19, 2005 1:40:29 GMT -5
Please gals, give me some time. I will update this next week. Hang in there.
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Post by Lanie on Aug 29, 2005 1:44:02 GMT -5
I know I know. It's been a little bit over a week already. Like I had promised last week, chapter 27 is posted.
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Post by Carrie on Aug 30, 2005 2:17:19 GMT -5
OMG Lanie, I just finished reading the first three chapters and wow, I am impressed girl! I'm not sure if this is your first time writing a fanfic, but I think you did really great! I don't believe her mother would have the nerve to have a man change his last name! That is way too insane and disgraceful. but sigh* KW is a very unselfish guy so he'll probably end up doing it to save his people. Okay I'm on to the next chapters. I can't wait to see when MB meet teehehehe.
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Post by Lanie on Aug 30, 2005 2:31:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the nice compliments Carrie. It's Tammy and Vy who inspired me to write like this. Seriously, I think my writing sucks. I've told everyone just to concentrate on the main idea. Anyway, thanks for taking your time out to read this loooooooooong fanfiction of mine.
Gals, chapter 28 is just posted. Enjoy!
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Post by TAMMY on Aug 30, 2005 16:43:55 GMT -5
lanie,i jsut read chapt 27028..its beautifully written!
I love the fact that kw care so much for ml and hes afraid to loossseeeee her..awwwwwww..loving it..plz update asap!
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Post by apple on Aug 30, 2005 22:36:58 GMT -5
Hi Lanie, I just read chapter 1-15. IT IS GOOOOD. Especially chapter 13...so much passion! I didn't know you're so kinky with the blindfold and all. kekkekeke Now I can't stop thinking about them doing it! Seriously, I love this story...I don't ever want it to end!
P.S. I hope there'll be more sexy scenes with KW and ML. ;D
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Post by fransisca on Aug 30, 2005 23:45:00 GMT -5
urgh....
please please please continue writing it......
cant stand it...!
OMG... my mind have been writing my own version ...kekekeke....
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Post by bbtgr on Aug 31, 2005 14:44:10 GMT -5
thanx so much for the update Lanie...love it girl...awwwwwwwwwwww....he pulled her into his ambrace....how sweet...I can't wait until they find out it's them that they've been looking for all along.....please update more .......hurry......like now.....I can't wait...thanx a bunch again sis.... REAL BIG MB HUG... *_~
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Post by Lanie on Sept 1, 2005 1:56:40 GMT -5
Fransisca, I would love to read your own version to this story. Please share with us your talents. We never have enough MB fanfictions to read in here. Start writing girl. As long as it's MB, it's so worth reading.
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Post by Lanie on Sept 1, 2005 1:59:49 GMT -5
Thanks for taking your time to read it Apple! I didn't realize that blindfolding is KINKY. Oh well, since you say so, then I will agree. Anyway, I am glad that you can't stop thinking about them doing it. You are not the only one here. There are MB sis who are like you and I too......gals, you know who you are. Stop blushing SC!
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Post by apple on Sept 1, 2005 15:41:28 GMT -5
Lanie, I just finished reading chapter 29. This story is getting better and better...I love the interactions between KW and ML so much that I don't even care about what happened with other characters. Stop teasing us and let them do it already! By the way, I hope you kill off his wife soon!  |
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Post by Lanie on Sept 1, 2005 17:45:45 GMT -5
Whoa Apple! Take it easy and be patient. Characters like his wife makes the story more interesting! Sorry to disappoint you, but I can't kill her off yet. You'll see why. Anyway, I didn't mean to tease you guys, I just want the anticipation to be built up. Apple, you have several other mini fictions to keep you occupied in the meantime. I am pretty sure the other MB Sisters are busy stroking there keyboards to give you the updates tonight. Hang in there girl.
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Post by bbtgr on Sept 2, 2005 0:01:36 GMT -5
Lanie...you can't stop there girl....arggggggggggghhhh.....why do you have to pause at J part?? Could you please hurry up and update.......so I can enjoy THE story....omg.....how could you do this to poor little moi??? hic hic...please update soon..thanx so much.....so dramatical.....I felt sorry that YF died..but wish she would leave MB a clue that they know it's them they've longing for...sniff sniff...hic hic....  |
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Post by apple on Sept 2, 2005 16:32:56 GMT -5
Hey Lanie, I just read chapter 30. I get why you still need KW's wife...very clever! This story is getting so good...can't wait 'til the next chapter. I hope ML says yes. wink wink!
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Post by tammy on Sept 2, 2005 19:22:32 GMT -5
first of all haha...sur eb..how can lanie hurt litle u liek that>??LOL
2nd) lanie, theres alot of twist to this story,keep me in suspense.
I hope ml found out its her son soon aww..so sweet..plz update asap
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Post by fransisca on Sept 5, 2005 0:57:39 GMT -5
hehehe..... the story is getting more exciting every chapter... every time I read the story I always have visual imagination on how things are going.... urgh, how I love to see them both..
regarding me writing a story, it's not my talent... I just use my imagination when Lanny is not writing the next chapter for days.... kekekeke...
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Post by Betty on Sept 6, 2005 15:33:44 GMT -5
My God Lanie!!! You're continuation is amazing!! I got lost in the reading because the love of the two was sooo strong. You can really see how deeply in love they are. The laughter, joy and pain the two share is just right. You are such an incredible writer. Thank you for writing such a beautiful love story. Everything was going fine, then Mei Chun gotta shows up and mess everything.
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Post by Lanie on Sept 6, 2005 17:16:38 GMT -5
Chapter 31 is posted.
Fransisca, writing has never been my talent. I actually hated writing before. Somehow MB love inspires me to do the strangest thing. Now I can only write about MB Love, nothing else. If I can write to entertain you like this, so can you. Give it a try and you'll be surprised.
Thanks Betty for the nice praise. I am glad that you actually got lost in my writing.
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Post by apple on Sept 7, 2005 12:29:43 GMT -5
I just read chapter 31. All I can say is WOW! I didn't expect it at all. You're so talented Lanie! Clapping Hands.
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Post by Betty on Sept 8, 2005 12:06:15 GMT -5
It must of been fate for Mei Ling to meet her twins again. Wow! The connection between a mother and child is soo strong. I am sooo touched. =(** Mei Ling daughter seems to be a mirror image of her. I love the story Lanie!!!
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Post by apple on Sept 12, 2005 20:39:40 GMT -5
Hi Lanie, I just read chapter 33...very very interesting. I'm curious how they gonna get together. They will get together, RIGHT?
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Post by bbtgr on Sept 12, 2005 23:16:15 GMT -5
omg Lanie..you better be updating as I'm typing now girl...it's getting sooooooooo intense...you know...I'm getting goosebumps just reading it.....please please...let them find out it' s them all along....girl...you give me a real fluttery feeling....like that long lost love reuniting.... hehehe..thanx a bunch sis....HUGS...  |
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Post by Lanie on Sept 13, 2005 17:42:01 GMT -5
Vy, your demand is so high that I can't keep up with you. Be patient will you, but keep the goosebumps there in the meantime.
Apple, I cannot reveal yet how they will get together or if they will have an ending together. Hang on tight cuz I will be taking you to the climax of the story. I will try to post it up later today.
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Post by bbtgr on Sept 13, 2005 22:03:29 GMT -5
omg..thanx so much for the quick update Lanie.....I love it girl....we're getting closer to the truth... I'm so excited ...can't wait... and btw...love the way KW is jealous...heheheh....put a smile on my face....coz deep down inside...ML only loves him...and him alone... HUGS... *_~
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